mardi 17 juillet 2007

urban beach

2 commentaires:

ifit a dit…

I'm curious why you are attracted to the beach. Maybe you could use this art piece with some type to express what this means to you. Tell me your story of what the beach symbolizes for you, how is it different from the beaches in France? You don't have to write a complete sentence. Just use a few words.

............................ a dit…

umm,

i agree with ifaat that this piece seems incomplete as a graphic design piece--

which is what it's starting to look like because you've added typography.

rework the type.

think about it being a poster for a beach event.

don't get to tight or cliche with it.

just evole what you already have here.

it's nice.

g.