Gigi, HERE ARE TWO BUSINESS CARDS. I did more. But was not happy with them. I chose an orange brown because classy, grounded and deep like you! I decided to play with FR>EN although it was the subtitle of your own design. I made it the name of your "company". Let me know if you like them. And don't forget to brief me. I design blind.
PS: I now understand your choice of fleur de lys for the card you designed!
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i like the top one and the last.
In the top one I am not happy with lower type, it is tooo tall in my opinion
I prefer the first one. I like the use of ">" as part of the logo, although I don't know how you are supposed to read it. but I think there are too many things going on overall. I feel that the hierarchy of information could be improved. it would also improve the design if you pushed the swashes more to the back by adjusting the color--currently, they are too prominent and interfering with the information. I like your reasoning about the color choice, but the color should define the business, not the person. are classiness, groundedness and deepness qualities expected from a company that provides translation services?
These are interesting. Try them without the drop shadow. Try without centering the type.
these are coming along.
keep all versions for your portfolio.
keep working on the them when you have the inspiration.
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